Here are the notes I took during the critique earlier today, Please feel free to add any notes that I may have missed:
Intro
-Add map in the beginning that says something about the conference
-Cut clips in half, and add more videos... needs to be even quicker
Beginning
-Fix archival images (take away the distortion)
-Add names of artists on the archival images
-Get footage of the marbles from the museum (Monday)
Middle
-Make cuts and shorten
End
-Fix the white type, make more readable
-Add more b-roll for the conference section
-Add two lifetime award winners, Bertil and Joel Meyer
-Get a second shot of the outside of the TMA for the second time it is shown (Monday)
-Messenger Studio outside shot?
-Pilkington indoor shots?
-Keep Voiceover , but get rid of the last shot of Jack?
See you all tomorrow for our last Friday critique tomorrow at 11:30
-Michelle
Calender
Process and Notes from Hanson
Process for Completion and Notes From Hanson
1. Order your sequences
-SCRIPTING (1-2 people orders each section)
-what pieces are similar?
-create a "bin" with extra comments included
-make it cohesive
2. Re-arrange the sequences based on the whole content
-keep the big picture in mind
-learn to let go of unnecessary details and walk away with the most important factors
3. Listen to it with closed eyes
-make final touches to the overall piece and polish
-critique for further review and show it to Hanson
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Content = Skeleton and MAIN POINT Key Notes: -Tighter is better (balance length with the amount of information being said, don't worry about length) -don't feel trapped, go get the footage if you need it! -work on ordering sequences while still gathering footage to save time -discuss the state of editing by specific dates and DEADLINES (they are included in the calendars)
-Communicate and work together as a team, one person shouldn't be doing all the work and one person shouldn't be doing nothing as well
Where are you guys? This is an important meeting, you need to be here.
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